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raytoons 28th Aug 2016, 8:44 AM edit delete reply
Love the view and lighting of the first 2 panels. Really nice!
raytoons 28th Aug 2016, 8:45 AM edit delete reply
Not too sure about the third and fourth panels though... They seem to similar to each other. If you ever plan to do this in print, you might want to change the 3rd panel's perspective... Maybe a more close-up shot of the character taking off the helmet?