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raytoons 28th Aug 2016, 8:37 AM edit delete reply
The tails (or pointer ends) of your speech bubbles in the fist and last panels really stretch and curve too much in the image.
raytoons 28th Aug 2016, 8:39 AM edit delete reply
And the tail of the speech bubble is getting kind of close to your characters faces in a couple of the panels. Its considered bad form for cartoonists to pierce their characters faces with a speech bubble tail.